I hereby
do solemnly pledge
to love people as a whole
race
through land mines
of scattered souls
with raised fists
and the ancient battle cry,
We are one
set of wings on a world
that is soaring
at great heights
forever fearing
the effects of such altitudes
but I promise
there is a way to be
fearful
and honest
all it takes is a leap
from recognizing
mankind
to accepting all of
humanity.
4 comments:
Excellent ending my darling. I especially loved in the first stanza the line break before "race" and "Through land mines of scatters souls" But my absolute favie was "forever fearing the effects of such altitudes" Beautiful =^.^=
very different than your usual style but i love it.
"set of wings on a world
that is soaring"
what a cool thing to hear and visualizee
Destroyer
http://www.stereogum.com/archives/mp3/new-destroyer-foam-hands.html
"Through land mines of scatted souls" paints such a specific and yet vague that it just works. no punctuation is good. it lets the poem FLLLOOOWWWW. :)
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